Duncan Robb Author

Author name: duncanrobb

Thriller author and occasional triathlete, former pro photographer and avid reader

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Writing progress

My Writing Process – Part One

Over the years, it’s inevitable that if you do something on a regular basis, you develop a way of doing it that suits you best. You may have tried dozens of different ways but through a process of trial and error, success and failure, joy and frustration, you arrive at a solution that works for you. At least that’s the theory. That’s not to say your solution is perfect and it might need the odd tweak every now and then, as new ideas or new technology comes along to make you think again or consider options that weren’t available before. So it is with writing. Over the past fifteen plus years since I started, I’ve read many books on the subject, attended conferences and seminars, watched countless video tutorials, listening to the wise words of famous and successful authors and gleaned something from every one. I’ve realised that everyone who sits down to write a book – fiction or non-fiction – has a different way of going about it, every process is tailored to the subject matter, personal circumstances, writing environment, time available and other outside influences that help or hinder the creative task of getting the words down and aiming towards the finish line – publication. My own process starts with an idea, or in the case of Susie Jones, an investigation. Several years ago, I wrote out a list of potential subjects for Susie to investigate and it ended up being a long list, which keeps growing. The joy of creating a character who can investigate anything, anywhere, either in pursuit of a story or to uncover corruption or criminality, means there is almost limitless scope for intrigue, danger and hopefully, page-turning thrills. So far, Susie has touched on the plague of spam emails and the dodgy world of fake meds in Sharp Focus. She’s become embroiled in the effects of a cyber attack on the online payment system in Four Meals from Anarchy, and in Silent Thunder she finds herself up against powerful forces in the energy industry. And there’s plenty more to come. Once I’ve settled on an idea for the story, I go down multiple rabbit holes in the name of research. People, places, events, products, all the elements essential to add credibility and atmosphere. Sometimes it’s OK to use real names, real places, real companies or organisations, other times I have to – shock horror – make it up. And that’s where the fun starts. Probably the most difficult part of the whole process is working out the structure of the story. It’s a matter of taking the rough outline of an idea and fleshing it out into a cohesive plot with all the necessary ingredients of a readable story – tension, suspense, action, clues, foreshadowing, twists, red herrings, character development – and all the while keeping it reasonably plausible. There are certain conventions to stories that a writer is supposed to stick to. Those conventions apply to almost all fiction, and equally to film. The three act structure is the most common convention, where the narrative comes to what’s referred to as “the inciting incident” about 25% into the story – the end of act One. The bulk of the story takes up the next 50% with a key part of the story happening about the three quarter mark – the end of Act Two. The final 25% of the story culminates in the exciting finale. Most books, if you read them with an objective eye, will follow the same format. If it’s done right, you won’t be aware, but if you analyse the book (or the film) you’ll find key moments happen around these points in the story.  I use a software program called Plottr to lay out the structure of the story in a visual way. Apart from plotting individual scenes and chapters, it also gives me somewhere to create and store details about characters and places, as well as make notes and save scenes I may have written but later rejected.  Once I have a plot and a rough outline of what happens chapter by chapter, it’s time to put distractions to one side, sit down at the keyboard and start typing. This is where discipline comes into play. I’ve heard/seen interviews with award winning and multi-million best selling authors who are disciplined enough to dedicate hours in the day and days in the week where they are not to be disturbed and they can get thousands of words a day written – day in, day out. For others (like me), days vary from the highly productive, to the “why did I even bother to sit down and stare at the screen wondering what to write“. Then there’s distractions; food and drink are obviously unavoidable, the internet and email are avoidable, but it’s too easy to get sidelined when you have to ‘just checking something online” and find an hour has passed and you’ve not written a single word.  The generally accepted length of the novel is at least 80,000 words, but it’s very easy to carried away and get to the end and find you’ve written 120,000 words – Guilty as charged. I write using an excellent software programme called Atticus which doubles as a formatting tool to enable me to see what the story looks like as either a paperback or an ebook. The tool allows me to customise the final look of the book before it’s sent to the printers or uploaded to Amazon. However – once the story is written and before it is uploaded or printed, there’s the small matter of the cover design and the marketing blurb. But that’s enough for this post. In part two, I’ll go into more of the process around getting the book into the hands of readers.

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A Sneaky Preview – Not That You Would Judge ​

As days, weeks and months race by at alarming speed, the deadline for the publication of Silent Thunder looms ever closer. It’s not just the words, sentences, paragraphs and chapters that make up the book, to say nothing of the plot, the characters, the required tropes, the nuance, the ingenious twists etc etc. There’s a whole bunch of stuff that has to be done to get it on the bookshelf (or your favourite online portal). And top of that list is the cover. You can and do judge a book by its cover. And that makes it something of a priority. I read somewhere that potential readers scanning shelves of popular books will unconsciously be drawn to the ones they like by the colours, font and imagery on the cover, and then only if it jumps out at them in the second or two their attention dwells on the book. There are unwritten rules for every genre of book and while they may change slightly over time, the basic theme of the genre will remain constant. As a reader you will know what you are looking for and you will instinctually be drawn to what you like and you’ll discount everything else. The exception to this rule is if you recognise the name of an author you follow, the more well known they are, the more their name takes priority over the books title. If it’s the latest book by (insert your favourite author here), you will at least pause to consider it without noticing the title. So when, as an unknown author, I’m thinking about the cover for Silent Thunder or the previous two books, I have to consider two things – 1. Does it fit in with others in the same genre – a thriller with a central hero figure, and 2. Does is stand out enough for grab the attention of potential readers. There is a third factor, applicable to a series. Does each book have a common theme, sharing a repeating image and font/title style. There’s also the question of how does the front cover image relate to the story itself. It doesn’t have to portray a scene from the book, but it should give a hint to the nature of the subject. So…with all the above in mind, and with a few more months to go before Silent Thunder is released, this is a sneak preview of the cover. Without giving too much away at this point, Silent Thunder sees Susie Jones investigating suspicious incidents within the energy industry. As she digs deeper, a conspiracy comes to light, with corruption and cover-ups hiding criminal activity and the self-interest of powerful forces. The cover has yet to be finalised. Once I’m happy with it, the next job is the blurb, but that’s a subject for another day.

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Who Are You Like?

A little bit of fun this time – to see which of the characters in the Susie Jones books you are most like. I’d love to tell you this is a highly researched psychometric analysis and the results are a definitive measure of your personality, but I won’t and it’s not. It doesn’t matter if you’ve read either of the first two books, but answer the six multiple choice questions and the depending on the result you’ll maybe gain a little more insight into five of the characters who features in the stories. I’ve also added a picture to each of the results. Always a risky business as I know when I read a story I have a picture in my mind of what each character looks like – their physical appearance, height, weight, build, colouring, their hair, their eyes, their expression. If a book I have loved is made into a film or a TV series, I can either be delighted or disappointed at the choice of actor chosen to play the role of a character. An author may describe their protagonist one way, only for the producer or director (or whoever signs up the actor) to choose someone with a very different appearance. Sometimes, they get it just right, and there’s a certain satisfaction in seeing a character you’ve rooted for in a book, come to life on the screen, exactly as you imagined them. The images, I’ve attached to each of the character thumbnails in the quiz are just AI generated, based on a brief description I gave it. Because I tend to think and work visually, I find it helps to have picture in my mind of each character when I’m writing about them. As a reader, you may have a different picture in your mind. I’d love to know how my idea of the character’s appearance, differs from yours. Anyway, as a reward for taking the quiz, there’s link at the end for you to download a free short story.

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Writing progress

I Can Hide No Longer

After too many months of little if any progress (I blame the good weather) it’s time to get book number three in the Susie Jones series written. I started back in January with the usual good intentions of New Year, but then got distracted by numerous er, distractions, and apart from a few half hearted attempts to get going again, the deadline I’d set myself, looked increasingly unlikely. So, here we are in the second week of July with a renewed sense of purpose, a new deadline and a new publication date. The title of book three is Silent Thunder, I’ll explain more about it in a future blog post (The Deadline Diaries) – and yes, part of the renewed purpose is to put a new post out every month. But right now I am committed to getting the first draft finished by the first week on October, allowing two months for proof reading, editing  etc and publication in early December. By way of illustrating my intention and commitment, here’s a picture of me, hard at work.  There. I’ve put my head above the parapet and put my plans in writing –  I have nowhere to hide. 

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